I doubt that the Loroi did not detect the disappearance at all, but they had probably no ships left to spare for a proper investigation. Or maybe there was something else going on?inxsi wrote: ↑Wed Aug 18, 2021 6:32 pmI've read up to Intermission A - really enjoyed it. I'm sure the disappearance of everything in that sector is nothing to worry about
This was something I wondered about when Beryl was surprised by the incursion from the Rallis checkpoint - even if the umiak (somehow) surprised the pickets and destroyed them before they jumped to warn anyone, the farseers should have noticed the loss of life (unless the umiak had replacements life forms). Well, the mystery makes it interesting.
I liked the way you portrayed the farseer, her farsight, and her interactions with the mizol.
Here, however, a particularly experienced Farseer "coincidentally" caught the Shells in the act. Then, also "coincidently", since they were not delayed by the Bellarmine, did the 51st come back just in time to be sent there to investigate.
Initially, I wanted to include an antimatter cannon, but then Arioch said that it would be improbable. Thus, I repurposed the idea somewhat. Also, it's quite hard for anyone to survive the ship's foundering with tons of taimat fuel instead of hydrogen/oxygen going off. This needed a better explanation in order for a survivor to be plausible.