WIP Discussion (Part 1!)

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I'd like to sneak one of the Outsider aliens into a panel somewhere, but I've been waiting for a time and place that felt right. When the time comes for me to have more than the one space elf in one place I'd love to abduct one or two of the Loroi for a cameo.
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You must do this, it is imperative.

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Great job on Alex's facial expression. I love it.


Edit: Also that hand is well drawn. Nice.
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I couldn't help but wonder, are Loroi vessels normally equipped with phallic imagery?
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I haven't visited in ages, nice to see that there are have been 20+ pages added in my absence.

Anyway, I wonder what Alex could be casually be talking about with that guard in the latest WIP.

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hi hi

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ed_montague wrote:I couldn't help but wonder, are Loroi vessels normally equipped with phallic imagery?
Not sure what you mean. Are you referring to pornography, or some kind of "Hindu lingam"-style ritual representations?

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I'm changing my guess.

"Reed, we should avoid panicking, but I pressed that big red button over there, and something is beeping very loud. I'm rather frightened, and could use a hug."

EDIT: And the response:
"Of course, Captain Jardin. Hugs all around."
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Count Casimir wrote:I'm changing my guess.

"Reed, we should avoid panicking, but I pressed that big red button over there, and something is beeping very loud. I'm rather frightened, and could use a hug."

EDIT: And the response:
"Of course, Captain Jardin. Hugs all around."
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That looks like the hallway next to the hangar bay.

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lovely art as always arioch, but as i usually say to my writer friend, i wants moar!....paraphrase and translated actually, but i hope the basic idea gets through.

for a 'what is being said' i will go with.

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Arioch wrote:
ed_montague wrote:I couldn't help but wonder, are Loroi vessels normally equipped with phallic imagery?
Not sure what you mean. Are you referring to pornography, or some kind of "Hindu lingam"-style ritual representations?
I recall you testified once that Loroi are discouraged from forming infatuations with specific individuals, so "'Hintu lingam'-stye" imagery was probably as far as Loroi culture would go on that quarter.

Frankly, I was just following the bandwagon.
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Why do Alex face remind me of the "Not sure if"' Fry meme

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Ooh, the new pic looks nice. Can't wait to see it finished.
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Looks like someone's planning an outing.

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