WIP Discussion (Part 1!)

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That better not be a suppository, Talon.

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I hope it is not somthing awkward?

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hi hi

Looks like an alien version of a flashlight to me.

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Zorg56 wrote:I hope it is not somthing awkward?
Not really, Talon just walks in on them and voices her disgust that Beryl hasn't made it into his pants yet.

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Being a Patreon supporter I have gathered that it is a portable lamp. The lights may go out to preserve energy so an emergency portable lamp should be standard equipment.

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Pick your favourite:
- Can I join? Please.
- What is that... How?
- Fireblade said... Oh!
- So that is how babies are made!
- Here is the lube you asked.
- ... [Backs away slowly]
- Umm. Are you two alright? I heard some weird noises...
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Zorg56 wrote:I hope it is not somthing awkward?
It is probably not a human artifact since it is in Talons hand, I guess those are in Beryls bag.

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bunnyboy wrote:Pick your favourite:
- Can I join? Please.
- What is that... How?
- Fireblade said... Oh!
- So that is how babies are made!
- Here is the lube you asked.
- ... [Backs away slowly]
- Umm. Are you two alright? I heard some weird noises...
Other ideas (not serious):
- Sensors were showing more oxygen use in this compartment then the tactical discussion area... wait, is that what humans mean by sleeping?
- Oh, humans don't extrude their stomachs from their mouths to eat like Loroi? Weird. (alternate: Humans use their mouths to eat?)
- That's human food? That's disgusting!
- Well *I* thought my suggestion that we just kill all the Umiak in the system was a sound tactical discussion.

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I think I'll take a simple "what is that terrible smell !?".

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Oh, people are going to have a field day with 150.

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dragoongfa wrote:Oh, people are going to have a field day with 150.
Aheh... yeah... good times... :oops:

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I'll hazard a guess that the thing in Talon's hand is just a fancy water bottle. Jardin probably got hungry after looking at an MRE pack and Beryl probably wants to have a taste as well. Of course, it's for the purpose of recommending the same to Loroi high command if they taste good.

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Finding it quite amusing, what ideas people have regarding the object in Talon's hand, I'll keep my guess quite grounded and say it's a flashlight/portable emergency lamp kind of thing :lol:

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Username wrote:I think I'll take a simple "what is that terrible smell !?".
You just won the best caption.Image
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Whoah, hang on, so beryl was spending some quality time alone in the dark with alex, "preparing the bedding area", while there were perfectly usable nightlights available?

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Talon: I brought a light so you don't have to feel around in the dark by touch anymore.
Beryl: Oh... Good.
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CF2 wrote:Talon: I brought a light so you don't have to feel around in the dark by touch anymore.
Beryl: Oh... Good.
While Beryl shows quite some disapointment on her face...

I wonder if a Patreon with "non-canon fan-service scenes" would attract more paying readers, similar to what Love Not Found does (the author has "extended scenes and side-stories" for those paying extra).

Still thinking back to the Telepanty excercise... :oops:
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charred steppes, borders of territories: page 59,
jump-map of local stars: page 121, larger map in Loroi: page 118,
System view Leido Crossroads: page 123, after the battle page 195

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Krulle wrote:
CF2 wrote:Talon: I brought a light so you don't have to feel around in the dark by touch anymore.
Beryl: Oh... Good.
While Beryl shows quite some disapointment on her face...

I wonder if a Patreon with "non-canon fan-service scenes" would attract more paying readers, similar to what Love Not Found does (the author has "extended scenes and side-stories" for those paying extra).

Still thinking back to the Telepanty excercise... :oops:
A better example would be the almost daily sketches of the Twokinds comic (and the 8000$ he makes per month).

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These women are really going to be the death of me...

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LOLS perfect label! 'snicker'

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