WIP Discussion (Part 1!)

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dragoongfa wrote:Oh, people are going to have a field day with 150.
Aheh... yeah... good times... :oops:

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I'll hazard a guess that the thing in Talon's hand is just a fancy water bottle. Jardin probably got hungry after looking at an MRE pack and Beryl probably wants to have a taste as well. Of course, it's for the purpose of recommending the same to Loroi high command if they taste good.

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Finding it quite amusing, what ideas people have regarding the object in Talon's hand, I'll keep my guess quite grounded and say it's a flashlight/portable emergency lamp kind of thing :lol:

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Username wrote:I think I'll take a simple "what is that terrible smell !?".
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Whoah, hang on, so beryl was spending some quality time alone in the dark with alex, "preparing the bedding area", while there were perfectly usable nightlights available?

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Talon: I brought a light so you don't have to feel around in the dark by touch anymore.
Beryl: Oh... Good.
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CF2 wrote:Talon: I brought a light so you don't have to feel around in the dark by touch anymore.
Beryl: Oh... Good.
While Beryl shows quite some disapointment on her face...

I wonder if a Patreon with "non-canon fan-service scenes" would attract more paying readers, similar to what Love Not Found does (the author has "extended scenes and side-stories" for those paying extra).

Still thinking back to the Telepanty excercise... :oops:
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Krulle wrote:
CF2 wrote:Talon: I brought a light so you don't have to feel around in the dark by touch anymore.
Beryl: Oh... Good.
While Beryl shows quite some disapointment on her face...

I wonder if a Patreon with "non-canon fan-service scenes" would attract more paying readers, similar to what Love Not Found does (the author has "extended scenes and side-stories" for those paying extra).

Still thinking back to the Telepanty excercise... :oops:
A better example would be the almost daily sketches of the Twokinds comic (and the 8000$ he makes per month).

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These women are really going to be the death of me...

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LOLS perfect label! 'snicker'

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hi hi

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I think Cpt. Jardin is thinking hard about a very difficult decision:
1. Seize the opportunity to make an utterly inappropriate pun, which will certainly lead to a major misunderstanding and may even result in him being thrown out of the airlock
2. Miss the opportunity of a lifetime!

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Did I say they are going to be the death of me? No, I am going for a spacewalk myself!!!

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Beryl Used: THOT BEGONE

It's SUPER EFFECTIVE

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hi hi

Talon looks genuinely shocked that Beryl is touching her. I've got a feeling we're going to hear a little bit about the Loroi taboo on touching... maybe. ;)

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Shoo! There are surely some things you need to do. Like storing supplies and preventing them from flying around when we tumble like this.
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icekatze wrote:hi hi

Talon looks genuinely shocked that Beryl is touching her. I've got a feeling we're going to hear a little bit about the Loroi taboo on touching... maybe. ;)
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The sketch doesn't show that she's pushing her into the trash compactor.
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I can conjecture WHY Beryl wants Tallon out of the compartment... 'snicker'. Tallon just said something VERY Lascivious! :)
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Re: WIP Discussion (Part 1!)

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sunphoenix wrote: Arioch has Three whole pages in the pipe for you all to enjoy when he gets them finalized and uploaded! :)
Since updateday is Monday, *looks at calendar*, I sense an elaborate joke coming up....

Still gonna enjoy falling for it!
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