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Not to metagame at all, but Jump Sickness is a disease that's confounded most of the other species in the setting, for a long time. I wouldn't expect much progress, particularly considering we're a little frontier operation. Treatment, maybe.

If nothing else, the general transliteration can be applied, even if the meter and rhyme is wasted. If they heard him speak it though, at least a measure of it could be retained. I imagine poetry to be something the Loroi struggle with as well, being as rooted as it is with creative mistruths. I did...

I tend to be a little wary of the Alien: What is this strange human custom called <reallybasicthing> Human: Well, let me tell you about it in a way that is really aimed towards provoking thought in the human audience. But you've done it elegantly, Dragon. You've picked your examples well. One thing ...

Dragon, your output level is an inspiration. Loving what you're writing, and the direction, and the characterisation and everything. Keep it up!

Well, the fan fiction is updating more often than the core text.

And I couldn't be happier, because this is some primo ****, Dragon. Keep on writing, this is pushing all of my buttons, particularly this last section. Loving the emotional and instinctual tension.

No Elerians, though. Hopefully they'll come later. No Gnolams or Trilarians either. That's a shame.

Sweforce wrote:The wave loom make me associate to the "Yamato gun" of the terrain battlecruiser in StarCraft.

Which in turn came from the Wave Motion gun (there's something about that name that seems familiar) from Space Battleship Yamato. Hence the name, Yamato Cannon.