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- Wed May 29, 2024 5:04 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: [Crossover Fanfiction] The Past Awakens
- Replies: 13
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Re: [Crossover Fanfiction] The Past Awakens
I kind of like how you made the Soia seem like a fusion of the Covenant, Flood and the Forerunners. I also like the new idea that the sapient Soia-Liron species are actually Soia remolded into new forms. Kind of like the way the Forerunner Didact reformed himself. Love or hate Halo 4, but Didact was...
- Tue May 28, 2024 1:57 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: [Crossover Fanfiction] The Past Awakens
- Replies: 13
- Views: 593
Re: [Crossover Fanfiction] The Past Awakens
Stillstorm: It’s obvious that the Shells have engineered some sort of diabolical, mind-controlled, pink-skinned husks… that they crafted into the likeness of our males so that we might put our guard... but are programmed to do the Hierarchy's malign Shell bidding! Beryl: Or… since they seem to have ...
- Sun May 26, 2024 2:10 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: [Crossover Fanfiction] The Past Awakens
- Replies: 13
- Views: 593
Re: [Crossover Fanfiction] The Past Awakens
"I admit great curiosity about these visitors. These Loroi and Umiak. While the plan is quite clear about the procedure of this situation, I have my doubts. How many failure points can the plan sustain before blind adherence becomes counterproductive? Surely in light of all that has changed, I shoul...
- Sat May 25, 2024 5:55 am
- Forum: Outsider Discussion
- Topic: Outsider humor thread
- Replies: 190
- Views: 938599
Re: Outsider humor thread
Why did Taben have significantly less bloody warfare compared to Deinar?
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Because they had less land to fight over.
- Thu May 23, 2024 2:41 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: [Crossover Fanfiction] The Past Awakens
- Replies: 13
- Views: 593
Re: [Crossover Fanfiction] The Past Awakens
Stillstorm, after waking from the crash and seeing incoming Shell troopers: <I need a weapon!>
I like how you made Loroi refer to their ships as 'the masculine' in contrast to humans referring to their ships in the feminine.
I like how you made Loroi refer to their ships as 'the masculine' in contrast to humans referring to their ships in the feminine.
- Mon May 20, 2024 3:42 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: [Crossover Fanfiction] The Past Awakens
- Replies: 13
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Re: [Crossover Fanfiction] The Past Awakens
"Child of my enemy, why have you come? I offer no forgiveness for mother's sins passed to her daughter."
Intriguing crossover. Show us more!
Intriguing crossover. Show us more!
- Sun May 05, 2024 8:41 am
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: A Chorus of Stars
- Replies: 77
- Views: 263208
Re: A Chorus of Stars
Author’s note: I have changed that Diaderet Sunbeam has also chosen to remain on Deinar with Greywind. Please take a moment to read my comments here before proceeding with the story. I noticed a few fanfic writers on this forum make a separate forum for commentary and another reserved specifically ...
- Fri May 03, 2024 4:31 pm
- Forum: Outsider Discussion
- Topic: Outsider humor thread
- Replies: 190
- Views: 938599
Re: Outsider humor thread
Why do Loroi hate Umiak?
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‘Cause the Umiak won’t stop bugging them!
- Fri May 03, 2024 4:25 am
- Forum: Outsider Discussion
- Topic: Loroi Trade translation request general
- Replies: 350
- Views: 654937
Re: Loroi Trade translation request general
Evil.
*While you're translating, do Loroi have a concept of good and evil? Or was that introduced by, oh say, the Barsam?
*While you're translating, do Loroi have a concept of good and evil? Or was that introduced by, oh say, the Barsam?
- Fri Apr 26, 2024 12:53 am
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: [Wolf329] Fanart - Charge of the blue platoon
- Replies: 184
- Views: 2708449
- Tue Apr 23, 2024 5:43 am
- Forum: Outsider Discussion
- Topic: Loroi Trade translation request general
- Replies: 350
- Views: 654937
Re: Loroi Trade translation request general
Pub or bar
- Wed Apr 17, 2024 2:55 pm
- Forum: Outsider Discussion
- Topic: Outsider humor thread
- Replies: 190
- Views: 938599
Re: Outsider humor thread
What do Teidars and terrorists have in common?
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Terror eyes!
- Mon Apr 15, 2024 7:32 am
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: A Chorus of Stars
- Replies: 77
- Views: 263208
Re: A Chorus of Stars
One of my greatest challenges in writing, I think, has been writing dialogue. And not just dialogue. But compelling dialogue. In this chapter you will find segments which focus on dialogue and others more on third-person narration. One more chapter after this. I hope you enjoy! The Egg Song lyrics ...
- Sun Apr 14, 2024 9:29 am
- Forum: Outsider Discussion
- Topic: Miscellaneous Loroi question-and-answer thread
- Replies: 6290
- Views: 5283898
Re: Miscellaneous Loroi question-and-answer thread
Is it particularly difficult for Loroi in general to put on noticeable amounts of muscle? Not gigachad swole type, but more Laura Croft or Wonder Woman style of athleticism. They are noticeably stronger, but not to a ridiculous degree like how most comic books portray heroes. Loroi don't bulk up th...
- Sun Apr 14, 2024 9:27 am
- Forum: Outsider Discussion
- Topic: Forum Issues
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2807
Re: Forum Issues
Not error 500 message. But I do notice that when I submit a post on some forums, the page goes blank and I am forced to retrace a step before posting it again.
- Tue Apr 09, 2024 5:33 am
- Forum: Outsider Discussion
- Topic: Miscellaneous Loroi question-and-answer thread
- Replies: 6290
- Views: 5283898
Re: Miscellaneous Loroi question-and-answer thread
Where might some of these enclaves and reserves be on Mestirot?
- Mon Apr 08, 2024 11:23 am
- Forum: Outsider Discussion
- Topic: Miscellaneous Loroi question-and-answer thread
- Replies: 6290
- Views: 5283898
Re: Miscellaneous Loroi question-and-answer thread
Do any of the sister worlds have reserves or for primitive Loroi, like the reserves for nomadic tribes or aboriginals on Earth?
- Sun Apr 07, 2024 12:37 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: A Chorus of Stars
- Replies: 77
- Views: 263208
Re: A Chorus of Stars
XXII - The Terrible Truth === (+) === >Remote viewing!< Hope sent excitedly in the observatory room. >The human actually achieved remote viewing!< >Let us not make conclusions so hastily,< Jade warned. >Don’t you realize what we have stumbled upon?!< sent Hope. >Together they received sensory infor...
- Wed Apr 03, 2024 3:49 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: A Chorus of Stars
- Replies: 77
- Views: 263208
Re: A Chorus of Stars
Reminder... again: Chapters 17 to 19 were changed, as was ending of chapter 16. Anyway, I am amazed how quickly I cranked this one out. I hope you enjoy! XXI - A Chorus of Stars === (+) === If there was one other benefit for Greywind to remain on Deinar, it might hasten Project First Son’s progress...
- Tue Apr 02, 2024 1:06 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: A Chorus of Stars
- Replies: 77
- Views: 263208
Re: A Chorus of Stars
Reminder: as I stated in my previous post, so as to not create confusion, I have changed the end of chapter 16 as well as chapters 17 to 19. The original version of the chapters have been saved just in case. But I think this makes for a better story. Though only you the reader can decide if you lik...