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Luckystar addition to the story made the Hospital scene more believable. Excellent fic !

Twoface having a panic attack and not wanting to give the baby to Livewire is believable. I just don't get why the Emperor wants to raise the child.

Why Jardin dont talk to this Brook dude? Beryl also not interacting with him. It is almost as if he is a ghost.

Second Disclaimer: this story attempts to tie into the fan fictions Looking forward to the Mirror and Reforged , which are the works of Dragoongfa, whom I hope approves. The fanfic can stand on it own actually. Is way harder to try fitting a hibrid child in the Reforged setting than making a fanfic...

Pretty good. Just need to correct "Lorei" and "Sentai" for Loroi and Sanzai.

The short version is that in any situation without some kind of effective ground defenses against orbital bombardment (like the Rebel's shield generators in Empire Strikes Back, or perhaps some way to blind the enemy in orbit), once space superiority is achieved around a planet, any ground invasion...

Assuming they want to capture the civilian population without damaging the local industry too much. Sextantis is a planet similar to Earth with three continents about the same size with two near one another and the other one far (almost at the other side of the world), water covers 83% of the world....

Blue is the civillian color, so the bigger one might be a caretaker and the small one might be a young Teidar. Fireblade uses the same clothing in the Teidar academy.

Still with us Novius? This fic is looking pretty solid. I hope you still have some ideas for the next parts.

Traps are gay, dammit!

Arioch wrote: ↑

Tue Jul 28, 2020 5:44 am

Nor would humanity be amused by a retaliatory infestation of certain Perrein-native organisms.

Mizol High Command: Unleash the Dogos !

Fireblade wrote:Yes, Beryl, I totally want to talk with your pet alien instead of sleeping.

GeoModder wrote:Now I wonder if Tempo's WIP comes before or after the WIP where the girls look shocked.

After. Tempo's WIP is 176_3 and the girls is 176_1.

Any chance of Echo appearing on next update? Or will you wait for her to appear in the comic first?

dragoongfa wrote:And there, finally sat my ass down and soldiered through the final part.

Nice chapter! It's great being able to read another prompt with Alex interacting with Loroi.

If not explicitly stated anywhere else

Arioch even did the math about her boiling people brains in seconds. She can also heat metal to the point it becomes weak.

What are their sleep postions ? Who got to spoon Alex ?

icekatze wrote:I'm not sure what kind of hygiene Alex was allowed to practice while in solitary confinement for days on end, but he probably could use a clean up by now.

He was allowed to wash and relieve himself, as long he was "observed" during the process.

And that's the first instalment. I figured that Tempo is quite pigmented for a Loroi, and would therefore be quite pigmented as a human.

I always thouht she was pale and Fireblade that was pigmented.

NOMAD wrote:Part 5 should be interesting to see what in the sphere?

We will see in 4 months. Hopefully...