WIP Discussion (Part 1!)

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She looks...ominous.
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I hope we'll finally get to see Fireblade speak in the comic ($10 says that she tell Alex to stop talking), there's only so much about Fireblade's personality we can draw conclusions on from her annoyed glares.

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That is a beautiful image.
ed_montague wrote:She'd look even more intimidating with a beard.
It is unfortunate that I must now desecrate it.
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Solemn wrote:That is a beautiful image.
ed_montague wrote:She'd look even more intimidating with a beard.
It is unfortunate that I must now desecrate it.
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Looks like Fireblade is not happy spending "many days" with Alex and Beryl talking most of the time.
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Panel 1

Beryl: Due to the size of the shuttle I regret to inform you that we will have to share cabins as there's not enough room for all of us to have our own.

Alex: I call Fireblade as bunkmate

Panel 2

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Panel 3

*Alex flying through the air towards the shuttle door*

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Not pictured: Alex' head crushed underneath her boot
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oh, why does fireblade always have that "don't mess with me" look all the time ?

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oh, why does fireblade always have that "don't mess with me" look all the time ?
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Alex Jardin, HERO OF THE IMPERIUM
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ed_montague wrote:Alex Jardin, HERO OF THE IMPERIUM
I can actually see that. And it makes an earie amount of sense.

Except Alex doesn't have a chainsword OR bolter. Or heavy artillery support.

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TrashMan wrote:
ed_montague wrote:Alex Jardin, HERO OF THE IMPERIUM
I can actually see that. And it makes an earie amount of sense.

Except Alex doesn't have a chainsword OR bolter. Or heavy artillery support.
Mr. Cain, as I recall, always made do with a laspistol. The bolt pistol on the covers was Imperium propaganda.

Also, if Alex is Cain, who is Amberley?
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Is Fireblade's face shield causing her green eyes to appear blue?

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Kinda. If you look at the previous pictures they are clearly green, it looks like the visor is a blue transparency so it would change the color of her eyes.

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Count Casimir wrote:
TrashMan wrote:
ed_montague wrote:Alex Jardin, HERO OF THE IMPERIUM
I can actually see that. And it makes an earie amount of sense.

Except Alex doesn't have a chainsword OR bolter. Or heavy artillery support.
Mr. Cain, as I recall, always made do with a laspistol. The bolt pistol on the covers was Imperium propaganda.

Also, if Alex is Cain, who is Amberley?

Beryl? She certanlyis...iquisitive enough.

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TrashMan wrote:Beryl? She certanly is...inquisitive enough.
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So, does Fireblade ever smile?

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She smiles as she dreams of the strange alien male who has won her heart. At least, that's what the fanfiction part of my brain tells me.

Also, have a scene:

Beryl: The interrogation will be quick if you cooperate.
Alex: Again?
Beryl: Tell us: how many space-faring vessels are in the service of Humaniti?
Alex: Um...
Beryl: (To Fireblade) He's not being cooperative. Bring out...the comfy chair!
Alex is seated in the comfy chair. Beryl has a triumphant expression on her face.
Beryl: Now you will tell us what we want to know!
Alex: ...
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ed_montague wrote:She smiles as she dreams of the strange alien male who has won her heart. At least, that's what the fanfiction part of my brain tells me.

Also, have a scene:

Beryl: The interrogation will be quick if you cooperate.
Alex: Again?
Beryl: Tell us: how many space-faring vessels are in the service of Humaniti?
Alex: Um...
Beryl: (To Fireblade) He's not being cooperative. Bring out...the comfy chair!
Alex is seated in the comfy chair. Beryl has a triumphant expression on her face.
Beryl: Now you will tell us what we want to know!
Alex: ...
:lol: Don't give them any ideas... :mrgreen:
Skaro wrote:So, does Fireblade ever smile?
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Good art, it looks like a complete illustration. By the way, Fireblade here (and not only here) looks like Pirotess from ROLW for me.

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